- Three
small bellies.
- Sad
their hunger.
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The way you have described it is great, and I like the way you've kept it somewhat ambiguous as well because.. it leaves room for interpretation, but it also suggests how anonymous they are, and how they are just ... three in a sea of millions who go hungry.
Really profound.